33 Words for the beginning, “The first time I saw…” – Trifextra Writing Challenge (Trifecta)

Trifextra Writing Challenge, Week 100: Use 33-words – all one syllable each – to continue the sentence “The first time I saw…”

The first time I saw…

…the post, I cried.  Was it true?  No more calls? No more hugs?  No more, “Love you, dear”?  The phone rang.  It was mom.  Her mom had fought…but lost.  My rock. Gone.

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20 thoughts on “33 Words for the beginning, “The first time I saw…” – Trifextra Writing Challenge (Trifecta)

  1. Sorry for your loss and for the way in which you found out about it. You conveyed that sense of grief and shock very well in your story. In that regard, well done. Sad story, overall, though. 😦

    • It was a terrible way to find out something like that. Most of my cousins found out that way, accidentally of course. Thank you very much. And thank you for the challenge. I look forward to more.

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